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  1. Sexy and stood up (my first short story - comments welcome please!)

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    privateprincess09 [sign in to see picture]
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    I took a deep breath as I opened the door to the swanky new bar.  I hated walking into places alone and I was almost certain that my date wouldn't be here yet.  He was a typical "bad boy", cocky, arrogant but absolutely gorgeous.  I couldnt resist his dark skin and bright blue eyes...

    I casually scanned the bar, not wanting to look like I was desperately searching for him.  Trying to look confident I made my way to the bar, flicking my hair from infront of my eyes. 

    I sat on the edge of one of the high bar stools, smoothed down my skirt and looked at my mobile.  21:15.  I had tried to be fashionably late but obviously my date had the same idea...

    "What can I get you?" came a low deep voice. 

    "Ummm, I'll have a....." I stopped mid sentence as I looked up from my phone and into the mesmerising green eyes of the barman.  He was beautiful.  An obvious gym freak he was toned but slim, olive skinned with a closely shaved head.

    "well?" he sniggered, obviously aware of his effect on me.

    "Erm, sorry...I'll take a cherry vodka and lemonade with ice please" I replied trying to sound slightly arrogant as I turned back to my phone. 

    "How about one for your friend?" he asked with a raised eyebrow as he nodded towards the empty stool at the side of me. 

    "I'm sorry...." I replied trying to sound slightly shocked "I thought you were a barman, not a comedian?". 

    His green eyes locked on my peep toe shoe and slowly his gaze trailed up my body to my chest.  "When you're ready" I mummered trying to disguise my blushes.

    I couldnt help noticing his pert behind in his grey jeans as he turned his back on me to get my change.

    I sipped my drink slowly through a straw, stealing quick glances at the door searching for my date and quick glances at the gorgeous barman.

    It seemed an age had passed when the barman approached me again and said "refill sweetie?". 

    "Please" I replied looking away from him. 

    I glanced at my phone again.  21:25.  "Where are you?x" I text my date holding a twenty to the barman without looking at him as he returned with my drink. 

    "Been stood up honey?" he questionned. 

    "Wouldnt you like to know" I shot back, "and by the way, my name is Carly. Not honey or sweetie or whatever else you'd like to call me".  He sniggered as he sauntered away again to the till.

    Ten minutes and a cherry vodka later, my date still hadn't shown up or replied to my text.  I made my way to the ladies to freshen up before giving up on him altogether.

    Looking in the dim lit mirror I began to feel slightly tipsy.  I couldnt work out who I was more frustrated with...my useless date or the arrogant barman.  Re-applying my lip gloss I heard the door behind me open.  In the mirror I saw the barman stood casually leaning against the door frame.

    "I wouldnt have stood you up if you were my date" he purred as he looked me up and down once again.  I casually undid the top button on my sheer black blouse and turned to face him. 

    "Is that right?" i replied as I strutted to make my way passed him. 

    He blocked the door with his arm and leaned in to whisper in my ear "no way"

    I felt myself become wet instantly as I turned to face him "whys that?" I teased

    He trailed his hand down my face, my neck, the side of my breast before landing it firmly on my hip and pulling me close to him.  I felt his hardness against me, suprised as how huge and thick it felt.  I gasped as i felt his hot breath against my neck and felt his moist lips kiss my ear lobe letting his other hand trail down my neck and into my cleavage.

    He gently pushed me backwards against the cold tiled wall as he proceeded to kiss down my neck, skillfully unbuttoning my blouse with one hand, clearly impressed that my bra fastened at the front (something I had planned for my date...) his head moved down as he gently kissed and licked my breasts before greedily taking one of my nipples into his mouth.  My nipples were definately my weak spot.  I felt my body shudder with delight under his touch. 

    He gazed up at me with his hypnotic green eyes as he gently bit my nipple.  Unable to resist I pulled him to me and kissed him hard, letting my tongue fill his mouth before he forced it out with his tongue and filled my mouth with his own.

    I moved my hand down his body to his erection and gently stroked it through his jeans before roughly pulling open the buttons for better access.  No boxers.... nice.

    His cock felt huge in my hand, the tip already glistening.  Obviously as horny as me.

    I raised an eyebrow and licked my lips at him before dropping to my knees and taking his length in my mouth.  His hand gently played with my hair before he grasped the back of my head, keen for me to take him deeper in my mouth.  His heavy breathing was driving me wild when he roughly pulled me up and threw me onto the leather chaise lounge, removing his t-shirt to show his hard tanned chest and abs.

    I let my legs part as his hand trailed up my skirt, my thigh to my crotch.  No knickers...another suprise I had planned for my date "oh god" he whispered, clearly impressed with my shaven pussy.  I was conscious of how wet I had become, determined not to come at his first touch. 

    His fingers fluttered over my lips and clit as my wetness rolled down them.  I arched my back and closed my eyes allowing him full access to me.  Suddenly his mouth was around my pussy, kissing, sucking and licking like a pro. 

    "Wait..." i whispered.  Too late, i felt myself come hard in his mouth.  I heard him moan as he lapped up my juices, my whole body on fire.  He moved up my body to kiss me hard, letting me taste myself on his mouth. 

    Just when I thought I could take no more his cock moved inside me.  I moaned loudly as he thrust inside me, deep, hot, hard.  He was perfect, our bodies moving perfectly in sync.  I bit into his shoulder as I felt him bring me to climax again...he carried on regardless riding the wave.

    He flipped me bending me over the chaise lounge onto all fours so that I could see us both in the mirror continuing to ride me hard and fast.  Occassionally leaning forward to feel my breasts making me moan with pleasure.

    I reached through my legs, massaging his balls as he moaned clearly happy about what I was doing.

    He pulled my up so that my back was to his chest one arm round my waist pulling me to him as he continued to thrust away - his other hand cupping my breast as he nibbled my ear and moaned with pleasure.

    As i came again and let out a quiet scream of pleasure I felt his hot wetness fill me.

    I let myself fall forward again onto all fours, panting exhausted. 

    As I looked up in the mirror to smirk at him I caught a glimpse of not only him, but my date stood in the doorway.............

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    For a very first post I would say you are gonna make soem good contributions on this site.  well done .

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    privateprincess09 [sign in to see picture]
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    Thank you! I have a few more to add! Overactive imagination! x

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    well done i think ther's another chapter in that story still

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    Lava_Twilight_x [sign in to see picture]
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    Worked for me ;O) xxx Well done hun, keep em' coming!! :D

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    privateprincess09 [sign in to see picture]
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    I have added another story "Working Late" hope you like it! x

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    Kitty-Dark [sign in to see picture]
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    wow that was so hot your a great writer....somthing I have to go do.  ; )

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    diamonds [sign in to see picture]
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    wow really good story and i loved the twist at the end :D

    Dxx

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    Loved it. Its so in detail and hot. Do post more :)

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