well i'm finally going to do it.

going to actually type up some of my work. will share it with you guys if thats ok once i have done it. must warn you though my punctuation is not the best and i probably will make typing errors as i do type ever so fast when i am in the mood! frustration probably!

my other half thinks some of my longer works are over decriptive as well. also any advice is welcome and as i have just started writing erotica i didn't know whether to do short stories or a complete mock up of a book, i have based all my current stories on the adventures of the same girl. As i have written it i have divided it up into 'chapters' but wondering if i would be better doing a continuation of shorter stories hmmm

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Looking forward to reading your stuff PPB

Im not actually a millon miles from where you are.....msn in profile if you are interested.

Several members on her may well offfer to edit for you if you are worried.

Walrus is 'my editor!!'

Good luck Princess.  I'm halfway through my first story so am feeling a bit nervous  Every time I re-read what I've done it seems more and more rubbish but I think if I drink enough it will feel like I can win the Booker prize! 

At the end of the day I'm enjoying it and that is the main thing.  Just have to close your eyes and jump in sometimes.

hey thanks

im going to get msn as im on a new computer and havent quite installed it yet

when i get it i shall put it on my profile

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Good luck with it.  At least if you add too much description, you can always refine it later rather than having to add it all in from scratch.  Also depends who you are writing for, women may like more description.  Write what you'd like to read and you'll be on to a winner.

ahhh thanks, i have completely ignored my book today and just started writing about my past experiences. not sure why and i always write in past tense but this is present tense and not my usual writing style so im a bit shocked really as i expected to be just copying the material i have which is fiction. way off the mark lol

and my first is more about the love than the sex too- no idea where it came from but hey- i got to be 16 again for the afternoon!

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