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This is the first draft, need tips on what to add/change/take out, if any :)

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I'm at work, today has been a total drag for me, nothing really to look forward too.  I was about to give up on the prospect of my life perking up, when I received an email from you which said;

Sara,

No questions asked, meet me at Dinton Pastures, 20:30pm on the mark.  Wear something.......sexy, with easy access.

Your admirer :)

Wriggling my bum in my seat, I try to readjust my position to make myself more comfortable, just reading your mail had started to get me going, I could feel my pussy dampening at the thought of you taking over me.

It's 17:25pm, only 5 mins left until I can rush home and prepare to me my match but 5 minutes too long, I hate clock watching!  17:29.............17:29 & 59 seconds..........I was out that door like a flash.  Waiting at the bus stop, it felt like a life time, everything seemed so long and daunting, I could tell tonight was going to drive me insane.  Finally the bus arrived, i whipped straight past the driver, literally chucking my bus fare at him.  Thoughts of us together were rushing through my mind, remembering other encounters where moments took us away from reality, you pinning me against the car bonnet, me wrapping my legs around your waist, thoughts that were starting to make my juices run wild !  I had to stop thinking of the possibilities, otherwise I'd never last.  Finally, the bus had stopped at the top of my road, without a second thought I wizzed off that bus like a tornado and quick paced myself to my house.  As I opened the front garden gate, I noticed a fair sized box, sat on my front step, moving closer, it was addressed to me.  Hurrying to get my keys in the door, I had to take a breath to stop myself from over heatintg.  Calmly I opened the door, briskly walked to my kitchen before grabbing a knife and frantically ripping the box open.  A note sat on top of the dark purple tissue paper, saying;

'Slip this on tonight, only this, you'll find a new coat on your bed.

See you soon'

Again, having to take slow deep breathes, it had been 2 weeks since we were last in each other's clothes and I was bursting to get back in them!  Trotting up the stairs and turning into my bedroom, I was welcomed by the sight of an ankle length, black, raincoat,with a purple bow on the front with another note, simply labelled with an X.  18:45pm, an hour and a half to go, so to bide my time, I switch on the shower.  Sitting in the bathroom, the house was quiet, except with the sound of the water bouncing off the shower walls, steam building up, I couldn't contain my frustration any more, so I lean back on the toilet, hitch one leg up on the sink, the other on the shower door.  Lowering my hand over my thigh, feeling my silky smooth skin, my fingers find my wet pussy.  Slowly massing my clit, I could feel my climax bubbling up. Throwing my head back and thrusting into my hand, I let 2 fingers enter into my wet pussy, my thumb massing my clit, thoughts of you clutching at my body and slamming hard into me as you cum, rushing through my head.  The moist steam of the shower, trickling over my bare skin, it's just too much for me to bare, taking in a deep breathe, I could feel the emotions bubbling up, slowly letting it out, I start to moan, wishing it was your tongue, running over my smooth pussy, instead of my fingers but in that instance, I Couldn't hold back, throwing my head back, I let out an almighty gasp and just as quick as it came, the feeling subsided.  Did I feel better?  Yes but was it what I wanted?  No.  Shaking off this feeling, I take the rest of my clothes off and step into the shower, letting my thoughts drift off to tonight's expedition..............

Drying myself off in my bedroom,I steal a quick glance of the barely nothing that you've requested I wear.  Laying out on my bed is a black lace chemise with a red silk tie, that reaches under the breast area.  I grab a pair of boy shorts in black, plain black, after all, it's the only thing that may keep my tooshie warm, until you can.  Running my hands over my smooth skin, my body starts to tingle again, i really need to get ready.  I decide not to wear a bra but nipple covers instead, read, to go with the small bows on my panties, I then slip on the cami.  It feels soft against my skin, perky up my large breast and sitting just under my arse, it actually makes me feel sexy.  I then slip on a pair of leather FMB's, knee high, before quickly sitting down and making my self look sexier than I would do.  Dark lips will do the job!  Placing on the coat you brought me, I stare longingly into the mirror, taking a deep breath in, it's now or never, I turn to leave my bedroom, grabbing a small bottle of lube and slipping  it into my pocket as I go.

20:20pm, I'm waiting my the car-park entrance at the back, unless you took a long good look, you wouldn't see me, blending into the shadows made tonight seem a lot more sexier than before.  I see a dark, tall shadow walking towards me, I'm hoping it's you!  Moving closer, I step back a little further into the shadows, a little fearful but none-the-less, still excited.  Without a warning, this darkened man grabs me, pins me up against the large oak tree behind me and kisses me frantically.  I panick and start to fight but, until I remember it's the dominant feel of your lips on mine, those arms always brought a warming sensation to my overexcited body, these memories calm me down.  Your fingers are fumbling around my coat, trying to undo my buttons but the winter's cold air was making it harder for you, giving you a helping hand, you suddenly demand 'NO, I'll do it' and at that moment, you rip my coat open.  The sheer strength of that, heightens my sensations, I grab you around the back of your neck and drag you back down into me.  Kissing, nibbling, fumbling, we're back in that moment of being lost.  You pull away and with a cheeky smile, you step back and take a quick glance, "good girl", you tell me.  Your right foot slips in between my feet, kicking my legs apart, both your hands resting under my arse cheeks, I feel you bending at the knees, as you lift me up and pin me against the tree.  Your right hand finds it's way down my body, your fingers creeping at every inch you cover, before finally wresting on my clit.  Your face snuggles down into the crook of my neck, nibbling at my skin, your low mumblings trying to tell me to 'mouth into me, wrap round me more'.  I'm finding it hard to hold back from coming, I need to be all over you, taste my juices as I lick myself off your dick, clean. You're biting at my ear, grunting, enough is enough and you slide your dick into my tight wet pussy, thrusting up into me, each deep hard thrust makes me moan, leaning back onto the tree, we're both enjoying the feel of each other, lost in our own world that we didn't even notice a couple walking by!

Looking over your shoulder, I stopping in my tracks, I whisper to you 'we're being watched, what do we do', to that you make a snide comeback 'shut up, keep fucking me you filthy bitch!'......who am I to argue! I can see that the couple are wrapped up in eachother, her back against his chest, the silhouette of her head resting against him.  I can make out faint movements and groans, are they?  Yes they are, they're playing too!  I tell you to put me down, I wanna feel you slide in from behind, fuck me slow and deep, whilst I play with my clit.  You turn me around, holding me by the back of my neck, you slip slowly into me, I'm gasping at the sheer size of your manhood penetrating my tight pussy.  I'm not the only one groaning with pleasure, I can hear her, over on the other side of the path, groaning too.  I slap your thigh, indicating to you to pull out, telling you to stay put and i'll be back.

I walk over to the other couple, noticing her shadow pulling away from him, she floats towards me.  Both meeting on the path way, we longingly stare at each other.  She's 5ft9, long flowing golden locks, piercing green eyes that stand out in the dark.  She runs the backs of her fingers along my collarbone, opening up my long coat she suddenly gasps, licks her lips and leans into me, cupping my firm, large breasts.  Our kiss is embracing, passionate, needing, I need more but I know that you want to test the waters too.  So I lead her towards our tree spot, leaning her up against the tree, neither of us say a word.  I pry her legs open with my right hand, my left hand held out, stopping you in your path,a s I demand that you watch us.  Dropping to my knees, I cup her firm breasts, tasting each nipple with a small flicker of my tongue, before I trail my lips down her soft belly and guide my tongue onto her clit.  As I'm tongue fucking her, you move in behind me, leaning over, you taste her lips.  I feel her hand brush past my hair, as she wraps her petite hand around your beast of a cock, I can hear you groaning, your hand laid gently around the base of my neck, occasionally squeezing, as you tense with excitement.  I'm hearing her groan harder, her thighs start to tremble against my cheeks and without warning, I feel a warm trickle of water, seeping out of her wet pussy.  It's the first time a girl has ever cum in my mouth, it excites me, I have to let  you taste her as I stand up, I grab you hard, my lips finding yours, my tongue letting you taste this strange woman, your hand finding her pussy in the dark.  Suddenly her hand slips under my arse, her thumb slips inside of my pussy, with a finger on my clit, your hands around my hips, rocking me back and forth on her.  She grabs my hair, making me lean back into her, kissing my lips from behind, you sucking on my nipples.  I don't last long, the cold winter's chill touching me, both of you turning me on, I pull you down into me 'Fuck me now, I need your dick in me, i need to feel you cum' but before you do, I let out an almighty scream, as I cum.  When you feel I've finished, you slip your hand under me, quickly flicking my clit, enough to have my juices running over your hand, you bring your fingers back up and demand I lick your hand clean.  Slowly sucking and licking your fingers, I can feel you quivering with excitement, we both know this isn't going to last long, so you sping me around, force me into the tree, rubbing my pussy juices over my arse hole before slowly inserting your harden cock in my arse.  We forget the woman is there, as I look over, she's heading back off to her partner, silently in the night, like we had never met. 

I flinch at the feel of your girth entering into my arse, reaching up, I wrap my hand back around your neck, pulling you into me, as I do you thrust up hard into me.  You whisper in my ear that you're reading to cum.  I move your hand down to my pussy, wanting you to massage me as you cum, kissing intensely, you thrust deeper, harder, feeling you tense up, you shoot your dripping cum into my arse, pumping hard with each thrust.  We stay attached this way for a few minutes before the cold of the night sets in, you wrap my coat back around me and lead me back out to the car, before taking me home for round 2.................

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sorry i've noticed a few typos :(

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 That sounds like quitea Friday night!  Yeah, there are a few typos, but that happens when you're in full flow.  Easily remedied with a bit of editing, but there are the foundations for a good old filthy piece of writing there :-) 

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Thanks Blueeyes, that's a lovely way to start a Friday in the office...  (and we can always forgive a few typos)

Can't help thinking blondies partner got the raw end of the deal though, hope he at least had a wank while he was waitjng for her?

Couple of minor niggles, if you're gonna use the 24hr clock you don't need the am/pm bit (told you it was minor), and my preference with dialogue is to break it out on to a new line, but that's just a preference...

So when can we expect round two?  Can't wait...

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lol round two will be up in a few days lol

I spell checked it but I think it auto changed words.  It's my first erotica type story, somewhere down the line, I would like to reintroduce blondie and her fella ;)

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i enjoyed it blue eyes ;)

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thank you x

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Re wrote it a little;

I'm at work, today has been a total drag for me, nothing really to look forward too.  I was about to give up on the prospect of my life perking up this afternoon, when I received an email from you;

Sara,

No questions asked, meet me at Dinton Pastures, 20:30pm on the mark.  Wear something.......sexy, with easy access.

Your admirer :)

Wriggling my bum in my seat, I try to readjust my position to make myself more comfortable, just reading your mail had started to get me going! I could feel my pussy dampening at the thought of you taking over me.

It's 17:25, only 5 minutes left until I can hurry home and prepare to meet my match but 5 minutes really did feel like a life time, I hate clock watching! 17:29.............17:29 & 59 seconds..........I was out that door like a flash. Waiting at the bus stop, it felt like a life time, everything seemed so long and daunting, I could tell tonight was going to drive me insane.  Finally the bus arrived, I whipped straight past the driver, literally chucking my bus fare at him. Thoughts of us together were rushing through my mind like an express train, remembering other encounters where moments took us away from reality, you pinning me against the car bonnet, me wrapping my legs around your waist, thoughts that were starting to make my juices run wild!  I had to stop thinking of the possibilities otherwise I'd never last 2 minutes, let alone an evening.  Finally, the bus had stopped at the top of my road and without a second thought I whizzed off out through the open doors like a tornado over open land and quickly paced myself to my abode. As I opened the front garden gate, I noticed a fairly sized box that was sat on my front door step, inviting me to grasp it's packaging. Moving closer, it was addressed to me. Excitedly, I started to fumble around for my keys, hurrying to open the door, I had to take a breath to stop myself from over heating. Calmly I managed to unlock my front door, before briskly walking into my kitchen and grabbing a knife with urgency, frantically ripping the box open, like a lioness pouncing on her prey. I noticed a note that was sat on top of the dark purple tissue paper, saying;

'Slip this on tonight, only this, you'll find a new coat on your bed.

See you soon'

Again, having to take slow deep breathes, it had been 2 weeks since we were last in each other's arms and I was bursting to get back in them!  Trotting up the stairs and turning into my bedroom, I was welcomed by the sight of an ankle length, black raincoat,with a purple bow on the front and another note waiting for me, simply labelled with an X. 

18:45, an hour and a half to go, so to bide my time and switch the shower on. Sitting in my bathroom, the house was quiet except with the sound of the water bouncing off the shower walls, steam building up. I couldn't contain my frustration any more, so I leaned back on the toilet, hitched one leg up onto the cool rim of the sink, my other leg resting against the shower door.  Lowering my hand over my thigh, feeling my silky smooth skin, fingers gliding towards my honey pit. Slowly I start to massage my clit, I could feel my climax bubbling up. Throwing my head back and thrusting into my hand, I let 2 fingers enter into my pussy, my thumb massing my clit, thoughts of you clutching at my body and slamming hard into me as you cum, start rushing through my head.  The moist steam of the shower, trickling over my bare skin, it's just too much for me to bare, taking in a deep breath, I could feel the emotions bubbling up, slowly letting it out I start to moan, wishing it was your tongue running over my smooth haven, instead of my fingers but in that instance I Couldn't hold back, throwing my head back,I let out an almighty gasp and just as quick as it came, the feeling subsided. Did I feel better? Yes but was it what I wanted? No! Shaking off this pent up frustration, I take the rest of my clothes off and step into the shower, letting my thoughts drift off to tonight's expedition..............

Drying myself off in my bedroom, I steal a quick glance of the barely nothing that you've requested I wear. Laying out on my bed is a black lace chemise with a red silk tie, that reaches under the breast area. I grab a pair of boy shorts in black, plain black, after all, it's the only thing that may keep my tooshie warm, until you can. Running my hands over my smooth skin, my body starts to tingle again, I really need to get ready! I decide not to wear a bra but replaced it with nipple covers instead, blood red in colour which match the small bows on my panties, I then slip on the cami, smoothing out the wrinkles, taking I! It feels soft against my skin, perking up my large breast and sitting just under my arse, cupping both my cheeks which look more than inviting for any man to see. I then slip on a pair of leather patent FMB's, knee high, before quickly sitting down and making my self look sexier than I would usually do, for you. Dark lips will do the job! I lean over my dressing table, seductively kissing the mirror and then running my finger tip down the cool glass, I now know I'm ready to go. Placing on the coat you brought me, I stare longingly into the mirror and with taking a deep breath in, it's now or never, I turn to leave my bedroom, grabbing a small bottle of lube and slipping it into my pocket as I head towards the unknown of the night.

20:20, I'm waiting by the back of car-park entrance, unless you took a long good look, you wouldn't see me, blending into the shadows made tonight seem a lot more sexier than I had realised. I spot a dark, tall shadow walking towards me, I'm hoping it's you! Moving closer, I step back a little further into the shadows, a little fearful but none-the-less, still excited. Without a warning, the darkened shadow grabs me and pins me up against the large oak tree behind me, kissing me frantically. I panic and start to fight but I remember it's the dominant feel of your lips on mine, those arms always brought a warmth sensation to my overexcited body, these memories calmed me down. Your fingers are fumbling around my coat, trying to undo my buttons but the winter's cold air was making it harder for you, giving you a helping hand, you suddenly demand 'NO, I'll do it' and at that moment, you rip my coat open, hearing a ping and realising that you had ripped a button clean off. The sheer strength of your action, heightens my sensations and I grab you around the back of your neck, dragging you back down into me, Kissing, nibbling, fumbling, we're back in that moment of being lost in each other. You pull away and with a cheeky smile step back and take a quick glance, "good girl", you tell me. Your right foot slips in between my feet, kicking my legs apart, both your hands resting under my arse cheeks, I feel you bending at the knees, as you lift me up and pin me against the tree.  Your right hand finds it's way down my body, your fingers creeping at every inch you cover, before finally wresting on my clit.  Your face snuggles down into the crook of my neck, nibbling at my skin, your low mumblings trying to tell me to 'mouth into me, wrap round me more'. I'm finding it hard to hold back from coming, I need to be all over you, taste my juices as I lick myself off your dick, clean. You're biting at my ear, grunting, enough is enough and you slide your dick into my tight wet pussy, thrusting up into me, each deep hard thrust makes me moan, leaning back onto the tree, we're both enjoying the feel of each other, lost in our own world that we didn't even notice a couple walking by!

Looking over your shoulder and stopping in my tracks, I whisper to you 'we're being watched, what do we do', to that you make a snide comeback 'shut up, keep fucking me you filthy bitch!'......who am I to argue!

I can see that the couple are wrapped up in each other, her back against his chest, the silhouette of her head resting against him.  I can make out faint movements and groans, are they?  Yes they are, they're playing too!  I tell you to put me down, I want to feel you slide in from behind, fuck me slow and deep, whilst I play with my clit.  You turn me around, holding me by the back of my neck, you slip slowly into me, I'm gasping at the sheer size of your manhood penetrating my tight pussy.  I'm not the only one groaning with pleasure, I can hear her, over on the other side of the path, groaning too.  I slap your thigh, indicating to you to pull out, telling you to stay put and I'll be back.

I walk over to the other couple, noticing her shadow pulling away from him, she floats towards me.  Both meeting on the path way, we longingly stare at each other.  She's 5ft9, long flowing golden locks, piercing green eyes that stand out in the dark.  She runs the backs of her fingers along my collarbone, opening up my long coat she suddenly gasps, licks her lips and leans into me, cupping my firm, large breasts.  Our kiss is embracing, passionate, needing, I need more but I know that you want to test the waters too.  So I lead her towards our tree spot, leaning her up against the tree, neither of us say a word.  I pry her legs open with my right hand, my left hand held out, stopping you in your path,a s I demand that you watch us.  Dropping to my knees, I cup her firm breasts, tasting each nipple with a small flicker of my tongue, before I trail my lips down her soft belly and guide my tongue onto her clit.  As I'm tongue fucking her, you move in behind me, leaning over, you taste her lips.  I feel her hand brush past my hair, as she wraps her petite hand around your beast of a cock, I can hear you groaning, your hand laid gently around the base of my neck, occasionally squeezing, as you tense with excitement.  I'm hearing her groan harder, her thighs start to tremble against my cheeks and without warning, I feel a warm trickle of water, seeping out of her wet pussy.  It's the first time a girl has ever cum in my mouth, it excites me, I have to let  you taste her as I stand up, I grab you hard, my lips finding yours, my tongue letting you taste this strange woman, your hand finding her pussy in the dark.  Suddenly her hand slips under my arse, her thumb slips inside of my pussy, with a finger on my clit, your hands around my hips, rocking me back and forth on her.  She grabs my hair, making me lean back into her, kissing my lips from behind, you sucking on my nipples.  I don't last long, the cold winter's chill touching me, both of you turning me on, I pull you down into me 'Fuck me now, I need your dick in me, i need to feel you cum' but before you do, I let out an almighty scream, as I cum.  When you feel I've finished, you slip your hand under me, quickly flicking my clit, enough to have my juices running over your hand, you bring your fingers back up and demand I lick your hand clean.  Slowly sucking and licking your fingers, I can feel you quivering with excitement, we both know this isn't going to last long, so you sping me around, force me into the tree, rubbing my pussy juices over my arse hole before slowly inserting your harden cock in my arse.  We forget the woman is there, as I look over, she's heading back off to her partner, silently in the night, like we had never met. 

I flinch at the feel of your girth entering into my arse, reaching up, I wrap my hand back around your neck, pulling you into me, as I do you thrust up hard into me.  You whisper in my ear that you're reading to cum.  I move your hand down to my pussy, wanting you to massage me as you cum, kissing intensely, you thrust deeper, harder, feeling you tense up, you shoot your dripping cum into my arse, pumping hard with each thrust.  We stay attached this way for a few minutes before the cold of the night sets in, you wrap my coat back around me and lead me back out to the car, before taking me home for round 2.................

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mm so nice i like the update so good

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thank you

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I'm just of to bed, i hope i am going to get some tonight. this has made my cock strain against my trousers

Thanks x

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fingers crossed for you lol

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wow that has got me super horny well done!!!

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That ws great, thank you.

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Thanks Blueeyes. Read this to my OH as a bedtime story the other night. It worked for both of us!! Really well written, keep writing talented lady!

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lol ty sleazysue x

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