Testing the waters part 2

 So here is part 2 please read part 1 first or it probably wont make much sense, here is the link (http://www.lovehoney.co.uk/community/forums/erotic-fiction/399384-testing-the-waters) and if that does not work search erotic fiction for Testing the waters and that will be it. Originaly wrote as a test for my ability to write a bdsm scene (visiting a Misstress for myself soon so I will have some first hand experiance) but i ended up going a little bannanas and since the bdsm part was more inportant that is why i split it up but since there was a demand for the rest this is it. I appolagize in advance if this couses offence. That is of course not my intention but there is a couple of themes in hear that are not suitable to everyone so if you get uneasy part way through it is ok  to stop and not bother with the rest. Bases covered as well as they can be please evryone enjoy and comment. PS girls of the orgasm army i double dare you to try Lexi's ultimate pleasure, who knows you may end up with a story of your own.

Still confined to the darkness of her blindfold Lexi struggled slightly against her bonds, her arms aching from being suspended above hr head. She pondered her life for a while as she often did when she was alone. Lexi had grown up with strict catholic parents, always restricting her freedoms and controlling every aspect of her life. She was brought up to believe that sex before marriage was wrong and that hell is punishment for wicked sinners. Years of being guilted into Sunday services and being the perfect loving daughter almost drove her insane.

 

On her 14 birthday Lexi was at her best friend Scarlet’s house. They were sitting on Scarlet’s bed and were talking about every topic under the sun. Their talk naturally turned to relationships. Scarlet spoke about her boyfriend Scott and how a couple of days before hand she had had sex with him for the first time. Lexi was embarrassed to even talk about the subject but she tried her best. It eventually moved onto masturbation and although she knew that Scarlet loved touching herself Lexi for fear of her parent’s reaction had never explored her sexuality. Scarlet after a very long conversation convinced Lexi to try it out and so after a few handy tips and an awkward demonstration Lexi was convinced that she would try it out. After getting home and finishing with her day Lexi lay naked in her bed.

 

 

Lexi very tentatively touched her nipples pinching and tracing the edges of them with her fingers like Scarlet showed her. She closed her eyes and dreamt about the perfect boy. He had swept into town on a big whit horse and lifted her up onto its back. He carried her away to a secluded farm in the middle of no ware and he laid her down on the hay and unbuttoned her dress all the way down. Slipping herself out of her dress his hands were soon all over her. Lexi’s moans rang out into the cool night air, her dream boy’s hands massaging every inch of her soft silky skin. Her lustful panting fuelling his desire his hands found her soft soaking wet sex. Fingers traced her forbidden lips infusing her whole trembling body with a sinful hot aching need. A finger pushed forward into her tight sweet virgin hole and Lexi let out a long strong groan of pleasure. In and out and in and out he massaged her forbidden flesh. Her body surrendered to his touch every inch of her ached for the sweet release she had never felt. Closer and closer Lexi felt her first orgasm building, but before she could get their, her father burst into her room.

 

“You dirty filthy bitch, get the hell out of that bed right now!” Lexi scrambled to her feet half startled and shaking all over. She quickly went to put on her dressing gown but her father ripped it out of her hands and threw it across the room. Her tears streaming down her face Lexi stood naked shaking in the middle of the room. Her father slapped her across the face and taking her hand he moved her to the other side of the room and bent her over the table. Lexi’s father smacked her backside calling her every filthy name under the sun. Lexi begged through her sobs as best she could but her father refused to listen. When he was done beating her he told her to get dressed and go down to the basement. Having locked her down there he spent the night packing all her clothes and the next morning he sent Lexi away to live with her aunt. Her aunt was worse than her father and it was only a few weeks before Lexi ran away and fell in with the wrong crowd.

 

Years later she ended up working for a ruthless businessman who behind closed doors pimped her to clients as payment for favours. He always made sure that she never saw anyone that would take advantage too much and since she had spent most of her teenage years sucking ff one guy or another she actually felt as though she had moved up in the world, after all her boss did pay her very well for just being a personal assistant, according to his accountant anyway. It was a few weeks after the Y2K scare that Leon first met her and he was appalled at what she was being made to do. Lexi had come to visit him in his hotel room after Lexi’s boss had had him clear up a small misunderstanding with his company’s computer storage systems. Leon insisted that as they were already old friends he didn’t need payment, but when Leon was relaxing in his room before his flight the next morning, he hated flying, he heard a knock at the door. There stood Lexi in a tight black leather miniskirt heels and a pink strapless top. She started with the usual hello sailor routine and before long she made her move. Leon gently pushed her away and asked her outright what she was doing there. When she explained everything he made her a deal, she would leave with him and he would give her a new life, and that was the first night they spent together. The next day he took her with him back to Phoenix and she has lived with him ever since.

 

Lexi took a deep breath in and exhaled all her pent up negativity. She wondered just how long she had been left all strung up like meat in a butcher shop window and just why she enjoyed being punished so much. Without her realizing Leon had snuck back into the room somewhere in the middle of her train of thought. He could always tell when she was thinking serious thoughts because her nose crinkled slightly as she made a kind of half angry face. He knew she would be feeling a little vulnerable so he decided it was time for them to have a bit of fun. He walked up to Lexi, his boots once again thudding on the stone floor. She was startled for a second rattling the chains that held her.

 

“Well, well, well, you were right to tell me the truth”.

 

“Oh my well I just, I didn’t want you to hurt me anymore”.

 

“Don’t you worry I wont hit you anymore, but I do have something else in mind for you”.

 

Leon took off his jacket and placed it on the table along with all the toys he had and the rest of his clothes. He walked over to Lexi, his long throbbing length bouncing slightly with each step, and set her free from her restraints. Leon ordered her to take off her panties which she did hesitantly and then he led her over to another table where he laid her down and once again restrained her but only her legs, spread comfortably apart. Lexi expected a good fucking on account of both her behaviour and cooperation but wasn’t going to give it up so easily regardless of the position she was in.

 

Leon climbed up on to the table and knelt astride Lexi. She could feel his cock resting on her tummy and she knew it was time to once again play her part.

 

“Wait please wait, I em, my husband I love him please don’t”. Leon grinned a little. He loved it when the role play was somewhat improvisational. Other tried and tested favourites were something of a bore when he already knew what would happen. But this one was fresh and new.  

 

“Oh yeah about your husband, we know you only married him for your cover identity. I know he’s also a cover agent same as you and before you ask yes he’s being interrogated as well”.

 

Lexi took in a quick breath, “Oh you know about him”.

 

Leon climbed off the table and retrieved a combined nipple and clit clamp chain and a small tube of stimulating lotion and once again returned to Lexi. Lexi heard the clamps chain rattling but wasn’t sure what it was. Leon rubbed some of the lotion onto Lexi’s clit and nipples and she felt it start to tingle a little.

 

“Hey what is that what are you doing”?

 

“Relax I’m just going to let you know how much I appreciate all your help”.

 

 Leon attached the clamps to her body and secured them tightly. Lexi squirmed, feeling the lotion stimulate the most intimate areas of her body. Leon slowly lifted Lexi up so she was sitting upright, she softly moaned, the shifting of the clamps combined with the lotion were driving her crazy, and this was exactly what he had done 3 years ago. If she was right, and she often was during play time, he would use her for himself first and then she would get her fucking, sort of a test to see if she was still on top form and she prided herself on her technique.

 

Leon took one of Lexi’s hands in his and brought it to his throbbing cock. Delicately he wrapped her thumb and forefinger around the end of his shaft and moved it slowly down to the head. Feeling the firm hungry flesh of her captor, her lips swelled with anticipation, her mouth ready to take in all her Master’s appreciation.

 

“Do you feel that”?

 

“Yes sir” Lexi nodded hearing him climb up on the table again. Kneeling up in front of her Leon brought himself to her mouth. He guided her hands to his ass and she held on firmly, being careful not to scratch him. Moving her head to the top of his length, Leon was an inch away from her.

 

“I want you to pretend I am your pretend husband and suck my cock like you would suck his, do you think you can do that”.

 

Lexi took in a deep breath to prepare, “Ok I promise I will make it good for you”, speaking in her best perfect slave voice.

 

Lexi moved forward tentatively, still blindfolded she couldn’t be completely sure, but soon enough her lips were pressed lightly against the head of his shaft. She slowly moved her body back and forth taking all of him in her, resting a moment she sucked, her tongue massaging his shaft before she moved back and let almost all him out again. Lexi felt the movement of the clamps setting her nipples and clit on fire, the sweet sensation of her pleasure fuelled her sucking. Getting into a rhythm she moved back and forth, the more she pleasured him the more she pleasured herself but Lexi had long since learned that there was as much danger in indulging her own interests without permission as there was in telling him to take her 9 inch thick dido and telling him to fuck himself, the result of which was an ass so red raw she couldn’t sit down properly for 2 days.

 

Lexi steadied her motion, back and forth and back and forth just how she knew he liked. His groans of pleasure and his hands on her head were measurement enough of the fact that he was almost ready to finish and sure enough her suspicions were confirmed when his grip tightened and he shot a load of his thick hot sticky cum down her throat, something Lexi hated in the past purely due to taste but Leon did take care of himself pretty well so he always tasted kind of sweet but not all the way. Lexi sucked and sucked his whole length in her mouth, until finally he motioned for her to let go and she lay back down on the table.

 

Lexi softly panted feeling a great satisfaction at making him cum so hard. Her breasts slowly moved up and down, and with each breath she was reminded that the lotion and clamps were still doing there job. Leon restrained her wrists to the table and after a long brief pause of nothing she felt his flat hands on her tummy. The surprise made her squirm, just a little but enough to shake the clamps. Leon slowly moved his hands up her body softly massaging her till he reached her breasts. Gently he massaged them resting his forefingers on her nipples. Lexi loved the feeling of that lotion on her body, every tingle and touch enhanced tenfold. He delicately licked all over and around her nipples letting the moans and squeals echo into the room. He moved down her body again letting his tongue tickle and teas her all the way down to her clit.

 

Leon gently licked and sucked and nuzzled her sex, using his fingers he carefully slipped one and then two into her slick wanting hole. Almost instinctively he found her g spot and firmly massaged it as he licked. Lexi wriggled in pleasure her moans and screams louder and louder.

 

“Oh, oh god yes more more please give me more”.

 

Leon moved his tongue away from her clit but continued to finger her. He brought his mouth over to hers and she could smell herself on his lips. He leaned in and kissed her deep, there tongues intertwined she hungrily lapped and sucked and massaged her lips against his drinking in as much of herself as she could. Moving his head away he fingered her harder and harder.

 

“Do you want to cum”?

 

“Yes please I want to cum please make me cum”!

 

“Tell me when you’re about to cum and Ill make sure you’ll have an orgasm you won’t forget”.

 

Lexi managed to force out an “OK” through her screams of ecstasy as her lover continued to mercilessly pleasure her. More and more his fingers worked, more and more he watched her lying their, writhing in blissful agony. Closer know than before Lexi felt her sex swelling and her lust building. Her orgasm was nearly upon her and ever inch of flesh ached for it every fibre of her being wanted so desperately to feel the sweet release of her first orgasm in days.

 

She tried early on in there relationship to pleasure herself without him ever knowing but somehow he always knew when she had stepped out of line. He could see it in her eyes. When she realized she could never get away with it, sometimes she purposely let him find a stain on her panties or a toy out place some lube missing from the bottle and she always loved the punishments that followed.

 

Sometimes a simple spanking, sometimes she was made to have a very thorough shower, being watched and inspected after wards. Once he had made her leave a medium sized but plug inside her self, having before hand signed her up for an aerobics class. She was told to leave it in the entire time which she did and told to wear the tightest pair of white bikini shorts she could squeeze herself into and a white sports bra at least a size to small and he knew it must have led to some embarrassing exorcise moments what with all the squatting and jumping and running in place she would have to do. When she told him all about it after walking from the gym back to their apartment she told him how the sweat from her intense workout combined with the juices she had tried and failed so desperately to control had left her outfit slightly translucent, and how she overheard some of the other women commenting on her appearance. Lexi didn’t feel the least embarrassed and with enough apologizing and begging the whole experience eventually lead to some yummy anal sex later that evening.

 

“I’m close, I can feel it building inside me I’m almost ready to explode”, the thought of her past disobedience and punishments giving fuel to the uncontrollable fire of her desires. Leon knew just how close she was and he cruelly pushed her as far to the edge of her pleasure as she could go before he removed his fingers and let her lay on the table begging and begging for her orgasm. He sat atop her for as long as it took for her to fall completely back into a calm collected state.

“Why did you stop? “You said you were going to give me an orgasm I wouldn’t forget”. Lexi spoke, trying to disguise the anger in her voice.

 

Leon smiled almost sadistically, “What I said was, Tell me when you are going to cum, which you did and I would make sure you have an Orgasm you wont soon forget which I’m going to”. “I just won’t be giving you that orgasm myself, but I will watch with pleasure while you have them”.

 

“Them”?

 

“That’s right traitor… them”.

 

Leon undid all of Lexi’s restraints and led her out of the room. They went down a long hallway and through into another room, all the time the swinging and swaying of the chain stimulating her nipples and clit. He led Lexi to a large four poster bed and told her to climb on top which she did obligingly. She lay out flat on her back as instructed and he gently dragged her by the ankles to the end of the bed. Following his further instruction she lifted her legs so her knees were up to her chest and Leon bound each of her ankles securing the ropes to the other end of the bed. He then proceeded to cuff her writs together, securing her arms to the end of the bed closest to her so her arms were stretched out in front of her and raised slightly above her body.

 

Lexi felt a little nervous, being tied to a bed and told tales of multiple orgasms was although thrilling, not part of her scenario. Tentatively she took in a deep breath and quietly asked her question.

 

“Excuse me sir, what are you doing”?         

 

“I am merely doing as I said I would. You want your precious Orgasms don’t you”?

 

“Yes sir please, I would like that very much”.

 

Leon picked up a vibrating double dildo and two bottles of water based lube one of which was anal lube. He laid them all out on the bed beside her. With both of her holes exposed to him he began by removing Lexi’s favourite exorcise butt plug and then he freshly lubed each of the dildos with the appropriate lube. Lexi had completely forgotten her ass was full of firm shiny crystal pink jelly and now she was more excited because she was going to get his hot thick cock right up her tight toned ass. She felt his finger massaging her ass hole with a generous amount of lube.

 

“Ooh sir, are you going to search me that thoroughly”?

 

Leon chuckled a little and proceeded to insert the double dildo into the appropriate holes. Lexi gasped at the feeling of having to large cocks inside her simultaneously but at this point she wasn’t going to argue.

 

“This is a brand new tool that I use to reward people who have been very good to me, like you. I’m sure your fake husband was very appreciative of you sucking his cock to protect your covers. But you are still a traitor and I want to be absolutely sure that you can be trusted in the future because you are just too delicious to simply let go”.

 

“Of course sir, after today I know never to cross you again. But I thought you would be using your own tool to make sure I stayed in line”.

 

“Honey I never said I wouldn’t, I thought the mouthful you had was enough but if you really want more then well see if your ass is up to it later. And If not I’m sure my personal assistant will be happy to relax me. She also sucks cock very well”.

 

Lexi moved her body side to side as much as her bonds would let her which wasn’t much at all and Leon took it as a sign to begin with the last part of their little game.

 

“This tool has attached to it a very powerful vibrator. You have from the moment it is turned on precisely one hour to prove that your loyalties are with me. All you have to do is endure the pleasure start to finish and I can be one hundred percent sure that your loyalties are with me. If you want to stop at any time all you have to do is say TRAITOR. If I don’t hear that word you will have to endure the pleasure for the full hour. Do you understand”?

 

“Yes sir I understand perfectly.”

 

“Say the word 10 times so I can be sure that you know it”.

 

“Traitor, traitor, traitor, traitor, traitor, traitor, traitor, traitor, traitor, traitor, sir”.

 

“If you have to stop I can only assume that you’re still traitorous and that I will have to spend far much more time making sure you don’t step out of line. Are you ready to begin”?    

 

“Yes sir I’m ready and I won’t fail you I promise”.

                   

Leon rested a finger on the vibe’s button and waited for the second hand to reach twelve.

 

 He mentally counted down with sweet anticipation and Lexi still in total darkness could only wait for her ultimate pleasure. It wasn’t quite the fucking she had 3 years ago but hell it sounded like it was going to be an improvement.

 

“6,5,4,3,2, test time”.

I promise to read this soon. xx

Sorry it is kind of long. like i said I went a little overboard but hey more for you. Thank you so much for responding. I know how petty it sounds but i have been going insane at the thought of no feedback on it. I put a lot of work into it and even though it was requested I never heard anything until know. Got me kind of down but know my spirits are lifted again. I really hope you enjoy it.    

That was a great read! I loved it start to finish!

The thing with erotic writing is that, in my view, there are 3 different types. The first is a standard 'fuck book' where there isn't great writing in it as such, but it is perfect to get me off while I read it. The pace is fast and the sex scene is long enough for me to masturbate and orgasm while I read it.

The second is bondage. Yours has it. It drives the imagination wild and I can read through it and just feel like I am taken away in to another world where the rules are different to ones at home.

The third is a sort of deep writing. Lots of imagary and well placed words and it is almost a novel. The story is there and it is set completely apart form sex and erotica, but it will have a few very steamy sex scenes in it that is tied in with the story. Often not long enough to read and masturbate like a 'fuck book' but it will encourage me to close the book afterwards and go to bed. ;-)

Your book is definately bondage. And I love it. But there is also enough sex in it to be a 'fuck book' - and with the back drop story of Lexi and her catholic childhood and rebelling in her teenage years, if that were to be worked on - like have a seperate chapter about her earlier life, and run through her feelings that associate with her younger years in the more steamy chapters, ie: when she is spanked, she remembers her father, she knows she has done wrong, and she deserves the punishement, but she has now grown in to a full woman who understands the difference between right and wrong, and work on it in that sort of manner. You could make a full book out of it!

I'm not critizising at all, I'm just throwing ideas in the air. I think if this had some more in it, it could be published! It's certainly has the makings of being as good, or even better than a lot of erotic books I have read!

Give yourself a good pat on the back Leon. You deserve it! :D

Thanks for the kind words AA. Your right in many ways about it being more about bondage than anything else and this time it is what i went for. You're assesment of the three diffrent types of books is good too. I understand about a fuck book being good enough to masterbate over but for me they tend to be a tad too repetative in the types of acts they portray for example blowjobs or just standard sex so If I were to turn this into a book i would certainly try to add more inventive sex or at least a steamy conversation from time to time in every chapter.

 Feelings and emotions are not somthing im very good at portraying in storys right now but i am trying to work on it and everything i have written before has colmanated into this and i will learn from this as i move on. What you said has given me so much confidence and i take evrything you said to heart. After all i wanted a frank analysis and that is what you gave so thank you very much. 

 

 Your welcome. :-) 

With feelings and such in writing, it can be difficult, but once you got the hang of it it can be pretty easy. It's sort of you learning about your caracters rather than you moulding them i to what you want them to be. Your Lexi is a pretty strong charsacter, and while you created her, she can have a life of her own and it's almost as if her owm character materialises before your very eyes as you write and learn more and shape more about her. Does that make sense ar all? (sorry for my typos.)

All writers live and learn from their mistakes. There are a lot of writers out there who cringe at their earlier work. A lot of writers find that their own mind grows as much as their stories. Its often a case of trial and error when you try something new. Much like in real life,prhaps thats why writing is so popular!

Anyway. I'm sure if you look around online you'll dfind writers websites, published and unpublished and forums where you can find out more and get some tips and inspiration from other writers. But I really liked this story, and I hope you will continue to write. xx

I liked the reading. I think if I was not as stressed as I am this very minute the story would have an impact on my body, but at this moment,it  unfortunately did not. But not the fault of the story, its just my tired body.

I do think you should continue writing. I would definitely read more of your stories.

I'm going to abandon Step Daughter's Love in favor of turning this one into a full story so look out for chapter 1 in the next couple of weeks. Still needs a title not sure about that yet but we will see. A big thank you to everyone who read and comented on it and a special big thank you goes out to Avrielle Aniko who is the insperation for what i hope you will be reading in the near future. 

 Thats some fine piece of work not normally a fan of erotic fiction but this was different..

mm a very good read indeed well done

loved it well done, keep up the good work

That was one hell of a erotic fiction Leon..i liked the spy/traitor fantasy and the subtext of the past pleasures/guilt coming into the whole storyline...I think your writing is very good and even though i am not versed I bdsm I thought the whole scenario was very well done both erotic and sensual..I have often fantastised about being a mistress with the male as the sub so this has given me some food for thought... please keep up your writing..i think you have a real talent :)